SNAPE, Severus

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Severus Tobias Snape

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Name/Alias: Anne
Age: 18
RP Experience: 4-5 years, on & off
How Did You Found Us: A link
How Much Time Do You Plan To Spend Here Per Week: Alot, depending on my work and school..
Other Characters: Not yet

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Character's Full Name: Severus Tobias Snape
Nicknames: Sev, Snape...
Age: 17
Year: 7.
Canon or Original: Canon
House: Slytherin
Birthday: Januar the 9.
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual
Blood Status: Half-blood

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Play By: Oliver Sykes
Appearance:
Severus is average of height and is perfectly satisfied with that. His eyes are dark and almond-shaped. His face is in fact pretty, and he don't have a lot of pimples and stuff like that. The only noticeable flaw on his face is his nose, that is both big and crooked. He really dont like that part of his face. His hair is black and shoulderlenght. It's all straight and he never does anything with it. Severus' clothes is most black and in dark colors, it shows how he is as a person. in class, ofcourse he uses his schooluniform and is really comfortable in that. severus doesn't really care what other thinks about the way he dress, as long as he is good in it and mostly he is.

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Likes:
+ Potions
+ Slytherins
+ Bellatrix
+ Dark magic
+ Sleep
Dislike:
- James Potter, and the rest of the gang
- Being social with too many at the time
- Flying
- Heights
- Being humilliated
Strengths:
+ Reading
+ Performing magic
+ Getting okay grades
Weaknesses:
- Being social
- Being a victim
- Lily Evans
Boggart: Lily death
Patronus: A big silvery tiger
Personality:
-Clever-
Severus might not look like it, but he is extremely clever and has a brain that really works well, mostly when he is under pressure. his strongest subjects in hogwarts are potions, defence against dark arts and transfiguration. it is in potions he gets the highest marks. he isn't the bragging kind of type, so whenever he get a good mark, he just smiles and remembers in his heart. because in fact no one really cares, well yes... his mother does, but it's really seldom that she writes to her. it's like she never got the time. or maybe has his father, Tobias (of who is named after) forbid her to write her only son. Severus don't know.

-Sensible-
Severus is often a victim. The "gang" from Gryffindor (which include: James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin and Peter Pettigrew) are always chasing Severus. Why you might ask, but Sev don't know the answer? Maybe it's because he is or WAS friends with James' little fling, Lily Evans. But honestly, Sev hasn't got a clue. Whenever he is being teased or bullied, sev just smiles and walks away but on the inside he is crying, longing to have friends.

-Cold-
Severus is very cold to everyone he meets on his way, it might be the reason why he didn't have any friends. But why change, when he have been this way all his life? His father never was nice to him, he yelled at him all the time, and Severus became more and more stuffier. his mother always tried to cheer him up, but i was too late.

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Father: Tobias Snape
Mother: Eileen Prince
Siblings: N/A
Other Family: N/A
History:
The day Eileen gave birth to Severus Tobias Snape, her husband, Tobias, almost left her. He was against the child to be born, but Eileen convinced him to stay. Eileen was happy to see the little black haired boy and she took good care of him, while Tobias never was around to look after him and when he was at home, he spend all his time yell at the little boy.

Severus didn't have had a easy childhood, when he got older he spent his time studying all kinds of dark magical things. when he was eight years old, he met a girl on a playground named Lily Evans and those two became good friends. he was happy to meet her, but then one day she stopped coming down to the playground and it was about the same time when Severus got his letter from Hogwarts. It said there he was accepted to hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry. when he came there , he was sorted into slytherin.

severus met one girl in slytherin that attacted him in a special way - bellatrix black. she was pretty as nothing he had ever seen, and they was average friends. severus was alright in school, as long as he could manage most of the subjects he was happy. now he is in his seventh year and is looking forward to finish school and get out and find a decent work, long from his father.

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RP Sample:

FIRST SAMPLE;

Dominique Porter, a fifteen year old girl in Gryffindor;

Saturday morning, 9.17, windy weather, but still some sun

The weather was windy, but it was just as Dominique liked it. She smiled and allowed the wind to catch her hair and play with it. Dom was wearing some grey sweat pants, a green t-shirt and some black Converse All Stars. Even though it was windy, Dom didn't freeze, she was extremely tough when it came to weather. She looked up in the skies and saw the sun. Dom really felt like screaming or singing or something like that - just act crazy like she used too. She had just finished her breakfast, maybe that was the reason for her hyperactivity?

Dominique found her favorite tree, and she sat under it. It was an apple tree, a very old apple tree, but always with very good apples on it. she reached and took one down and checked - nope, no worms, so Dom took a bite. You could wonder, how come Dom is so slim, when she eats so much? It's because she uses all her energy on fun things, right now she felt like running, but needed one to run with so she just sat down and waited. Maybe Tyler came? Dom took another bite from the apple and started to stretch out.

SECOND SAMPLE;

Dom still looked down the path to look for someone, she could go run with. Then all of a sudden, Tyler came and Dom smiled broadly. He sat down next to him and greeted her with what he used to, so she just smiled. "Hey handsome" She said and giggled. She felt extremely fresh and smiled at him. Tyler really was a handsome boy, but how would he react if he knew what she felt for him? Domi blushed at the thought. "How about going for a run?" She asked and stood up and took a deep breath. She then took the last bite of the apple and threw it down the path, where it landed right next to Tyler's pear core. Dom couldn't see it, but it formed a little something that looked like a heart.

Domi started to jump, where she stood, just because her energy level was sooo high. She smiled at Tyler and then she started running. "Come on, Ty." She yelled at him with a happy smile. Ty, that was her nickname for him. She liked it.

[narcissa acardia black||]

Hey Anne,

Well there are a few things that need some work. I know you told me about the 'bad grammar', but well, it's not as bad as I first thought it would be so that's a plus. You seem to have some problems with the verb forms, so that's the only thing that really bugs me. I'll have to talk to the other admins about this application to see what they think. Well, I can see that you've put a lot of effort in it, so that's a plus.

Uhm.. other than that... the RP-sample didn't really convince me. It's a nice lenght though I'd want you to go more in depth, don't write a follow-up of things he's doing, but try to be more descriptive.

So, change the rp-sample a little, try to find the right verb forms (mostly problems with trd person singular) and I'll get back at you

[narcissa acardia black||]

Okay, so the admins have talked this over and we've come to an agreement! (yay)

So, in general we like your application. It's nice that you put effort in your posting and well.. We would like you to continue that at fractured memories! So, yes you are accepted. Do note that we do want proper grammar (though everybody makes mistakes) so try to upgrade it a little. and well, we're sure that if you put enough effort in it, you can do it!

Welcome!